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 * Continue the story from where the other writer has stopped. Feel free to add a title, chapters, or anything else that you think the story might need.**

= = =__The Legend of Joaquin__=

Chapter 1
It wasn't exactly clear why all those things were happening, but there must be a reason. Things don't just simply happen for no reason whatsoever, especially THESE things. It couldn't all just be a coincidence. Every things start on that night, when the moon was undercovered by your own light, the stars are shining a little bit more, they want to tell a beautifull history about things that happens in a teenager´s life. Thats was the night when a teen discovered his own superpowers, that was saw by the stars. The stars couldn´t belive in what they were seeing! That little boy named Joaquin was in fact a government's experience that didn´t worked. This event gave Joaquin the unbelievable power to SHINE ON THE DARK!!! With his incredible skill, he could shine much more than any star in the sky, even more than any sun or a 220V lamp! Instead of beeing ashamed of himself, he exceeded all expectations and decided to become a Super Hero. After walking on the streets at night wearing his little purple costume, people started to call him: The SunSet. The evil could not compete against his lighting super powers. The city was becoming peacefull under his light. Although, in a calm day of August, something unexpected happened, something that even the stars weren´t waiting for, something that would change the History forever... Even the most powerfull light have your own darkness, when the eclipses of the sun came, the shadows try to make a creature made by the darkness of the eclipses the only power who can block the shine of the stars, or any 220V lamp. The darkness made the DarkHoleSet, the only enemy who can absorb the light of Joaquin. Could be that the fate of Joaquin, die by a dark creature?! Die from a creature made by the eclipse!? Let the darkness reign over the light !? He cant let it happen, because he remember, the eclipse pass and the light come to end the dark, and he knows that the time to make it shine to end with every darkness on the earth, that's the time to fight. Maybe if the stars could help Joaquin,giving new powers or strategies to combat the darkness.... So, one day the stars looked atJoaquin and gave to him, the MOST important power, he could be invisible, for all efects and all the situation if he wanted, like consequence for all the goverment's experience, his skins cells can lose or gain color, only with a mental command, so Joaquin can be with darkness' color too,consequently they can fight on equal terms. One day the two met and to show what they're able to do. Joaquin couldn't see anything, just a dark shadow behind a girl with a black hood, her eyes was bare and her voice bothered him: "Hello little boy, are you frightened?" "Maybe, are you?" "Fright is one of the feelings that I do not know." "That´s excellent so I don´t need to be bothered about your feelings." "Which feelings? Do you think I have any? Poor boy." "I´m not here to talk about your feelings, I´m here to destroy you..." "You´re the one who will be destroyed." After that little conversation the fight started He run on her direction, but she jumped and entered in the darkness, he couldn't see anything and didn't became scared when he listened her's voice comming in his direction. He just left the lightness enter in him body and change him. When neither of the two expected ,quickly changed their color and came a stronger light like sunshine, and a black cover girl was hiding her face.She didn´t expected that and starded to run away before she could escape he held her and bunch her on stomach she got angry and a black flame satarted to run the place that makes him feel disoriented and fainted she started to laught but the light started to shine more and more he began to float and then oppened his eyes and they where blue like the sky when he looked at her she started to burn.



Chapter 2
After that legendary fight, Joaquin decided to retire. The city was already safe from the darkness. So he decided to travel alone and start a new life somewhere on the north side of the country. Some days had passed by but he didn´t like any place he went to. Despite all the obstacles Joaquin could finally find a small village bordered by a river. That was a perfect place to wash his soul and start over. Some day, when he was fishing silently, a girl appeared on the other side of the river. That girl made Joaquin fell even mo re shiny than a 220V lamp! That was love at the first sight... Her name was Juracema. The most beautiful woman in the village. Joaquin knew that it was impossible to date her, but his heart spoke louder. Juracema was committed with the richest and the most handsome man his eyes had ever seen, Geová. Though he knew it was imposible to be with Juracema, he didn´t know the most importaint part, Geová had superpowers too! He tried to keep distance but it seemed that her sence call him and he couldn´t resist.They started to meet each other every day at the evening in front of the river they never kissed or act like a cople but you can see that they were in love. One day, Geová was s trolling in his boat and saw his pledged girl, she was sitted over a wood chair with a rose in her hands, Geová stopped his boat in front her and asked: " Hey what are you donig here?" " I..I'm just looking the lake " she got nervous. " Who gave you this rose?" " N..no one, I've got there" she pointed an small garden He looked around and got off the boat. Joaquin was in his house and could see the boat stopped he decided to go there to see what was happening. But he could not go there and act as if Geová was a normal person, because he had superpowers too, so Joaquim needed to find one strategy to descovery what he could do.

At first he decided to put in order what he knew about Geová: "He has superpowers." "He´s rich" "He doesn´t like me" He need to be carefull because a wrong step and everything was going down the hill. As he´s heart wanted, Joaquin runned as fast as he could to save Juracema from Geová´s claws. While Geová was getting near to her, our hero yelled: "Noooo!!"- When Geová saw such a strange scene the strange guy started to shine even more than 220V lamps! Impressed, Geová decided to use his superpower: The ability to speak with marine animals!! Before Joaquin could fight againts his archrival, a giant whale appeared from the river right behaind them! In a unexpected moviment Joaquin kissed Juracema for the very first time and jumped in the whales mouth carring Geová with him. Some seconds further, the Joaquin´s shineness was gone and the whale dipped into the river and never get back. Even now-a-days, sometimes, you can see Juracema is alone, sitted down on that seat holding that rose and waiting for her love to get back from the sea...

Chapter 3
Some days had passed by and Joaquin was still living with Geová in the whale´s mouth. Now they were friends and were living under the sea. However,they still doesn´t know if they will let these friendship continuos although they started to creat a plan. Geová was able to feel when they were near the coast, when they were near of somewhere they started to bunch the whale so the wale throw up them in the coast,when they where in mainland they discovered that they didn´t know where they where.

They ended up in a desert island, they were in the middle of Bermuda Triangle. they found fuselages of ships, planes. Everything that they couldn't imagine was there. They walked during days, living by eating very differents fruits, they saw exotic birds and animals. One day, Joaquin felt something uncommon, he ran and Geová followed him, they entered in a cave, dark at the first time, but a ligth lit the place, was the Joaquin's star! The brightness was so strong and intense that Geová became blind immediately, he couldn't see anything more,but with Joaquin the oposite happened he started to feel stronger and shine and the star asked him: "-Do you want a wish?I can realize a wish for you!" So Joaquin tought 'I could wish back to Juracema' but while he toughts that he listen a scream it was Geová and his eyes were burning and he remember that he couldn´t let him there so he said to the star: "I want ask for Geová stop do that with him" "But in a moment of your life he made you suffer why you want to help him?" "Please help him he´s my friend he changed" So the star helped Geová and The Star gave him another wish because his wish wasn´t for him so Joaquin asked a giant boat where both of them could scape from the island. And them the boat appeared! A huge boat with all the tripulation in it! On the very next day Joaquin and Geová left the island in an amazing adventure! They cound´t imagine how dangerous the Bermuda Triangle was...

**Chapter 4**
The sea was calm... Just another day in the middle of the sea. However, the future had bigger plains to our heros... Suddenly, the boat started to shake, the waves got bigger and stronger. They thought " It's a storm!", so they looked from the horizon and didn't saw nothing. One crew member shouted. "What's that?" "It's an snake, isn't?" - other guy. "An snake?"- another guy pointed for the sea. Everybody stoped and looked for the wave made of snakes. Millions and millions of snakes, moving fast and probably hungry. Joaquin jumped really high and in the top of the sky, he started to shine, but an giant snake ate the entire boat... And them, the legend of Joaquin ended. He left the life to shine in the History!!